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Discussion in 'Testing Forum' started by inbetven, Mar 24, 2009.

  1. As the name said i am here to write something that will be small part of my book.
    I am no writer but i read many books only four are really good.
    My real language is not english so errors are often.
    book begins :


    In ages people fascinates me like sunny day brings joy to little bird. My people for 500 years meets new civilizations. One civilization is more develop t then eny other they can travel by mind, read thought this is story about them......
  2. Thank you so much for sharing.

    I dont get it though, is this an idea for a book?
  3. Its better if its published only in forums! :D
  4. He didnt answer me! Fine! Maybe you are right, maybe it should be a forum book. I think I will plagiarize him, if he feels like it he can sue me for everything I have! :p Shoot, he could just ask and I may give him everything I have! ;)

    In ages people fascinates me like sunny day brings joy to little bird. My people for 500 years meets new civilizations. One civilization is more develop t then eny other they can travel by mind, read thought.

    This is story about them.

    We called them the bird people because of the huge blue tail feathers sprouting out of their butts. No, they could not truly fly, they would waddle around like big, overweight chickens. But they were like super chickens because they not only had mental telepathy but also because they had developed their boogers into efficient killing weapons. We soon learned that if a bird person turned his nose up at you to run for cover.


    Whew, that is enough for now, my creative juices are stewing. Inbetven, if you feel you can use any of this material please feel free! :)
  5. Okay, I'll join in lol.


    Due to their very efficient snot balls, the chickens were seen to be very notorious. They would often use this ability to ransack other villages that laid in the valley below. Unrest was starting to grow, the pecking penguins were getting rather unsettled by the chickens tyranny, but their undeveloped beaks would be no match for the chickens snot cannons. They decided to employ the help of Ignis the Iguana, Ignis was master of stealth who studied under the great Jedi Master Kenobe…


    Okay JN4, your turn now :p
  6. Ignis was the penguin people's secret weapon. He would stealthily creep into the chicken people's village and snatch them up with his long iguana tongue and eat them! Oh sure, they tried shooting their booger laden snot balls at him, but he just used the force to deflect the balls. The chicken people tried to fly away but they could not, Ignis just sucked them up one at a time. The situation was getting dire, the village was turning into a chicken massacre, Ignis was getting full, his belly was bulging. But all was not lost! A solitary figure appeared from out of the cloud of blue tail feathers and iguana slobber! He came striding into the village square like a conquering hero, standing taller than his chicken peers, his blue tail feathers braided into a long whip, his co#kscomb standing proud and erect! It was Maurice, the infamous chief of the chicken warriors!
  7. Ignis stood there in shock, even with his truly remarkable abilities he knew he was still no match for the chicken master... Especially on a full stomach.

    Ignis quickly reflected back to when he was studying under his master. Obi Wan always said "never back down just because the odds are against one"... An old jedi saying passed down threw generations, from master to apprentice.

    Given the fate of Obi Wan Kenobe, Ignis decided to use his never before mentioned "flashbangs" he always carries with him in his trusty survival belt his aunt Nora bought for his birthday. Whilst running out of the chickens village he stumbled across a lady penguin the chickens took prisoner… This penguin was unlike any other Ignis has ever come across, she had smooth fur from beak to toes and her "black to white" changeover lines were perfect. He was instantly in love (yes there had to be a love story, you all knew it was coming!), he could not simply leave her there... But he knew that he didn't have the time to help her out of her cage. He stopped next to her, looked deeply into her soft eyes and said "I'll be back".

    When Ignis got back into Penguin town, he was confronted by Alvin the penguin doctor. Alvin explained that his daughter, Patrisha went wandering out of town and never returned... It was obviously to Ignis that the penguin who was encaged inside Chickentown was Alvins daughter.

    Confidently Ignis said "Alvin, whether it takes me 10 days or 10 years... I will get Patrisha back to you"

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